OK, so this mood board contains a collection of ideas that look promising but you need to work on two things... firstly you need to animate the prezi so that I know what I should be looking at and in what order. Secondly, you need to provide some kind of narrative / explanation for your readers. Why have you included the images? What do the bullet points mean? Add in headings. At the moment it's just too abstract to understand!
OK, so this mood board contains a collection of ideas that look promising but you need to work on two things... firstly you need to animate the prezi so that I know what I should be looking at and in what order. Secondly, you need to provide some kind of narrative / explanation for your readers. Why have you included the images? What do the bullet points mean? Add in headings. At the moment it's just too abstract to understand!
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