Thursday, 23 March 2017
Wednesday, 22 March 2017
Evaluation of two ideas
I chose the two ideas that i feel are the most professional and effective ones out of the four that i had to chose from. Idea 1 is taken from the ink in water pictures that i took and then developed and edited them into a full idea. Idea two is of waves crashing at a beach that didn't require many changes to make it look like a final product.
Pros of idea 1:
- The image relates very strongly to the theme of my music video as everything has to do with water, storms and natural disasters. The words 'Inside the storm' create a reference to the name of the band Tempesst which means a storm and therefore creates a narrative of the band taking you on a journey inside a storm with them and shows the relatability of the band.
- The artwork is subtle but also effective as it has the abstract feel to it which allows the audience to interpret it in any way they want. There is also a minimalist aspect to it and this creates an identity for the band and shows exactly what genre and what mood the band will want to create.
- The logo for Tempesst also creates a distinct name for the band and is subtle but recognisable and i feel that will expand on the idea of the band being minimalist but also professional at the same time.
- The colour pallet is blue because it links the idea of water and being in a storm. It uses two shades of blue effectively with the lighter blue complementing the artwork and allowing the audience to focus on the artwork.
- There is a strong focal point in the cover as the artwork is on the rule of thirds and has a very good composition to it and with the text also being on the rule of thirds it makes the negative space more effective as you are automatically drawn to the art and the text making the whole cover very effective.
Cons of idea 1:
- Artwork could be misinterpreted and the audience could not get any messages from it and then the cover doesn't work as a whole.
- The image could be too minimalist and the whole thing may look unprofessional because of the negative space taking over the whole cover. This could lead to the whole cover not being very eye catching and then it could all seem a bit boring.
- The artwork in places is not edited very well and the flowing water is spiky in certain places where the Photoshop is not done correctly and could have been changed.
- The font could have been different as it seems too thin and could lead to it not standing out and whole cover could be seen as too plain.
- The genre aspect may be off as for the indie genre i feel that it fits however it doesn't fit the psychedelic side of it. There could have been another element added to it that could for fill the psychedelic aspect of the cover as that is part of the genre for the band.
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| Idea 1 |
- The image relates very strongly to the theme of my music video as everything has to do with water, storms and natural disasters. The words 'Inside the storm' create a reference to the name of the band Tempesst which means a storm and therefore creates a narrative of the band taking you on a journey inside a storm with them and shows the relatability of the band.
- The artwork is subtle but also effective as it has the abstract feel to it which allows the audience to interpret it in any way they want. There is also a minimalist aspect to it and this creates an identity for the band and shows exactly what genre and what mood the band will want to create.
- The logo for Tempesst also creates a distinct name for the band and is subtle but recognisable and i feel that will expand on the idea of the band being minimalist but also professional at the same time.
- The colour pallet is blue because it links the idea of water and being in a storm. It uses two shades of blue effectively with the lighter blue complementing the artwork and allowing the audience to focus on the artwork.
- There is a strong focal point in the cover as the artwork is on the rule of thirds and has a very good composition to it and with the text also being on the rule of thirds it makes the negative space more effective as you are automatically drawn to the art and the text making the whole cover very effective.
Cons of idea 1:
- Artwork could be misinterpreted and the audience could not get any messages from it and then the cover doesn't work as a whole.
- The image could be too minimalist and the whole thing may look unprofessional because of the negative space taking over the whole cover. This could lead to the whole cover not being very eye catching and then it could all seem a bit boring.
- The artwork in places is not edited very well and the flowing water is spiky in certain places where the Photoshop is not done correctly and could have been changed.
- The font could have been different as it seems too thin and could lead to it not standing out and whole cover could be seen as too plain.
- The genre aspect may be off as for the indie genre i feel that it fits however it doesn't fit the psychedelic side of it. There could have been another element added to it that could for fill the psychedelic aspect of the cover as that is part of the genre for the band.
Pitch
My video is based on a love story. It consists of 2 characters where one is trying to chase the relationship even though it is broken. This video follows their relationship struggles as it shows the boy being blinded by love and fixated on the girl. He follows her through several city locations in an effort to find her and remove her mask.
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